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Blanche by Bory-Einfrost Blanche by Bory-Einfrost
The first page of a short color comic I made 2 years ago, to complete a little tutorial book I made.
It was done in a hurry and I had difficulties with the page size @_@ *and it's easy to see it when looking at the next pages*
Go there if you want to see the whole comic: [link]

No english translation for the comic as it's too complicated for me *if you success to do a good translation, cookie for you! It means your english/french skills are really good*
The first page is simple so yeah:
"Some tears.
And his voice...

Why are you crying, my love?
Close my eyes, listen to my breath fading...

Cause you know...
You know...

... that I will recognize the taste of your kisses."

Blaaah it's awfully shojooooo once translated in english, it's almost embarrassing >__> so basically it's poor Blanche who doesn't like herself and meet this psychopath named Calixte, they fell in love lalala but she's sick and dying. The end. The translation of the last page would be this:
"(in the end) Calixte made me sleep.

Don't cry.
Isn't our love eternal?

Won't you wake me with a kiss?

I know the taste of your lips,
the touch of your fingers.

I will dream until the end,
and for all eternity, of the taste of your kisses. "


I think I will go to draw a bloody illustration now, to get rid of all this shojo thing in my head >__> ...

Tools:color ink
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:iconakekari:
Akekari Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Т.Т
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:iconnmarquez72:
nmarquez72 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love it. 
It's very dramatic and almost XIX century romantic. 
Very very impressive!
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:iconayame-himeru:
Ayame-Himeru Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Alors je ne sais pas comment j'ai fait pour tomber sur cette image (vu la date de publication...) mais j'aurai adoré, piquée par la curiosité, lire l'histoire. Malheureusement le lien est mort... :( Ou est-ce que je peux la lire ?
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Orosei Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
J'ai vu cette image en 2009, c'était un des premier dessin qui m'a donné envie de dessiner. 
Et il est toujours aussi beau après toutes ces années :heart:
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:iconkaribuxy:
KaribuXY Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
No offense but on the first look ,I thought I was looking at some RWBY Artwork lol Sweaty 
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:icontheoneandonlygeordie:
TheOneAndOnlyGeordie Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student Filmographer
Not gonna lie, thought the same. Still, this is some good stuff!
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:iconcleojuliet22:
cleojuliet22 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Le lien est mort, on peut pas lire ! SNIF
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:icongrace-zed:
Grace-Zed Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful. Inekoitplz  Love the colours here! :heart:
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:iconmakethestormfall:
MakeTheStormFall Featured By Owner May 16, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What does it say
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:icontokicraft:
tokicraft Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Tears,
and her voice
Why do you cry, love ?
Listen to my breath​ calming down
For you know,
You know
That I will recognize the taste of your kisses
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:iconmakethestormfall:
MakeTheStormFall Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww, that's so cute. And kind of sad.
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:iconitachiuchihahd:
ItachiUchihaHD Featured By Owner Edited Mar 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 Is Beautiful #1
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:iconatc6v7bino:
atc6v7bino Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2016
جميلة
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:iconobirinforever:
ObiRinForever Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2016
... Magnifique. Qu'est-ce que j'aimerais savoir colorier comme ça !

C'est vraiment magnifique ! (oui, je sais, je l'ai déjà dit ... Je me répète ♫ )
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:icon126artsoul:
126ArtSoul Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016   Digital Artist
I like the way you colored the background, it does a good job symbolizing the girl's life slipping away.
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:iconnaranomi:
Naranomi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Artist
Am I the only Fangirl that was like "RUBY AND WEISS :D" xDDD
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:icondimisa64:
Dimisa64 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
c'est tellement beau ... bravo !c'est magnifique!
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:iconciilya:
CiiLya Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
wOUAAAAAAH !!!! J'adooore !!! I love it !!! Beautiful !!! :D
Bref... c'est zoulii !!!! ;)
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:iconanimelover981:
AnimeLover981 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
That is the sweetes and cutest and most adorably unosetting thing in the world!
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:iconbludreams:
BluDreams Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so sad ;^; I didn't know I even liked tragic shoujo until I saw this
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:iconcatherinee21:
Catherinee21 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing!
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:iconanimazing11:
animazing11 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Student General Artist
great pic but i wasted ten minutes translating it when i could have looked at yours blaaaahhh oh well it is still awesome!!!!!! :3
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:iconkawaii139:
kawaii139 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
c'est tellement beau.... *snifffle*
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:iconkawaii139:
kawaii139 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
C'est tellement beau ... Il m'a apporté
les larmes aux yeux, presque ... bon travail!
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:iconparris411:
parris411 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
I love it! Beautiful!
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Sheridan-Clark Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
"Tears. And his voice. Why are you crying, love? Close my eyes, hear my breath subside. Cause you know ... You know .... I recognize the taste of your kisses."
Google translate. XD I didnt see that you had written what it said below. *Facepalm*
Beautiful. I love it.
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:iconliecreator:
liecreator Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
wow!!! i like it
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espadaXgrlX00 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
damn, pretty pics but i wish i knew what that said. LOL
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:iconelisartistique:
elisartistique Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student General Artist
C'est beau... O_Q
J'aime... Le line splendide... La colo...fantastique... BRAVO ! x'3
Je le mets en favoris !
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:iconcontessladymoonlight:
actually, in franch it sounds a loooooot more romantic..... (i know what i'm saying, but i won't say why) I HATE SHOJO!!!!! But the drawing is amazing, congrats!!!!
PS if you're a manga fan, i suggest :
kuroshitsuji (by Yana Toboso aka Black Butler, if you like it, plz read my fan fic about it "kuroshitsuji the contract" by ContessLadyMoonlight, my 1st deviation!! YAAAAAAAY)
fullmetal alchemist (wonderful!!)
d-gray man (amazing!!!!)

Those 3 for a start, contact me to talk about mangas, or if you think i'll make a good friend!!
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choji001 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
god! This caught my eye just before I clicked next and it makes my o sad, but happy at the same time, epic job!
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:iconchyna-angel-girl:
Chyna-Angel-Girl Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really good art! Great job! :)
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:icongurexkuroi:
gurexkuroi Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
D:!! <3
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:iconxxsakleaxx:
xXSakleaXx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
Don't get rid of the shojo! Used to my daily bread ;)

But seriously: this is so saddening...takes my breath away...
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Shining-Ruse Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Student Artist
I thought it said
"Tears.
And his voice ...

Why are you crying, love?
Close my eyes, hear my calm breath ...

Cause you know ...
you know ...

... That I will recognize
the taste of your kisses ..."

my guess XD sorry, bad french
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Peatchoune Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Waouh oO C'est beau , diantre que c'est beau LOL

Oui, je peux me permettre de parler français XD
C'est exactement mon genre d'image en plus x] Je pensais en faire une pareille mais ..... j'suis pas assez forte T___T
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:iconcosmicmutt:
CosmicMutt Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
very nice

c:

~~
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:icontsukatsujin:
TsuKatsujin Featured By Owner May 24, 2010
But the shojo is beautiful <3 You're really good with words ^_^
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:iconmisssmileholic:
MissSmileHolic Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010
Magnifique, magnifique, que ça a dire *s'en est même dépriment* en tout cas tu as beaucoups de talents, c'est incontestable.
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strtl0011 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010
Minimalistic color really helped bring out the emotion of this scene. Kudos!
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:iconamelie294:
Amelie294 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
That was such a great story! It was short but so full of feeling!
(Im extremely happy I'm french right now. no translator needed! lol)
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:iconsunchanenmascaradah:
sunchanenmascaradah Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
T///T wwaaa...how sad and sweet at the same time
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:iconbory-einfrost:
Bory-Einfrost Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
Thanks ^^
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:iconsunchanenmascaradah:
sunchanenmascaradah Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OooO watcheo if you do not mind
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:iconthundergoddeskino:
ThunderGoddesKino Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Student General Artist
Mmm.. bittersweet angsty romance. I love it!!! >D
Also, love the soft and pretty feel to the whole color scheme. :heart:
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:iconatama--muhonnin:
Atama--Muhonnin Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Very beautiful picture :iconhappyhappyplz:
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:iconluckeuly:
luckeuly Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Waaaa chouper dessins *.*
(je me dispense de parler anglais ... c'est pas mon fort cette langue é_è;)
Voilà donc bravo et bonne continuation ;)
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scarletspy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
I pretty much managed to translate the rest of the comic and it was so tragic! Amazing work!
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EthernalSilence Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2009
i readed the whole comic and it made me cry my heart out,so ,so beautiful,words cannot describe how i feel

just wandering,could i upload it on my blog,of course saying that is your creation,just to let know people how beautiful this is :heart:

i will wait for your answer:)
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:iconbory-einfrost:
Bory-Einfrost Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
You can post the 1st page and put a link to the others, but please don't upload the whole comic o_o; Thanks
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